Simon寫的小作文發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)明顯問(wèn)題： 學(xué)寫作要敢于質(zhì)疑和挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威

我的一位學(xué)員發(fā)現(xiàn)Simon寫的一篇小作文過(guò)多的重復(fù)使用介詞at 描述數(shù)據(jù)，這種敢于質(zhì)疑和挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威的精神是非常值得肯定和贊許的，學(xué)寫作很需要這樣的精神。

那怎么來(lái)改進(jìn)呢？ 好辦, 問(wèn)英文改寫最強(qiáng)大師（沒(méi)有之一）GPT-4, 下面是改寫版，指令里特別要求不要用介詞at:

The table presents consumer expenditure percentages for three different product and service categories across five nations in 2002.

It is evident that food, drinks, and tobacco accounted for the lion's share of consumer spending in each country. In contrast, the smallest percentages in the table were allocated to the leisure/education category.

Surveying the five nations, Turkey and Ireland saw markedly higher consumer spending on food, drinks, and tobacco, registering 32.14% and close to 29% respectively. The spending ratio on leisure and education was also most pronounced in Turkey, scoring 4.35%. Meanwhile, Italy exhibited significantly elevated expenditure on clothing and footwear, reaching 9%, a figure higher than any of the other nations.

The table indicates that Sweden recorded the least percentages of national consumer spending for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, roughly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain posted slightly more elevated figures for these categories, however, it exhibited the smallest percentage for leisure/education,registering a mere 1.98%.

我們可以注意到，GPT-4通過(guò)不同的動(dòng)詞來(lái)呈現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)，還有一個(gè)地方直接帶出數(shù)據(jù)。（下劃線部分）

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